Reflection on Final Content

Are there any areas of the presentation you would like to give any more detail on?

One thing that we mentioned in the presentation would be that I think we could of explained better would be the inspiration slide where I think when explaining the inspiration for the killer our group did not mention that the killer did not look anything like the main character even though its the evil version of himself, Another thing that I think that our group could have talked about more would be about the meet my audience part of the presentation, where we did not mentioned everything that was on the slide and only mentioned what the age of the person is and what shops/TV shows they like, we forgot to mention what their hobbies are and what they do in their free time.

What did your audience identify as the strengths of your short film idea?

The audience liked the idea of there being constant nightmares and the killer having an evil version of himself. The idea of the man having constant nightmares every day and having those nightmares link seemed very interesting to the audience, When explaining that each person dies a different way, the audience agreed and found it interesting and thought it would make the audience want to see how each of them die.

What did your audience identify as areas for improvement

The audience thought that the whole idea was too much to fit in a 10 minute short film and thought that it was not a good idea to have each of the friends that get killed be different personalities of the main character, and thought that they should be actual people so that it would make more sense. The audience did not like the idea that the dreams would be in black and white since we were told that nobody had dreams in black and white so it would not make sense.

What changes will you make to your short film concept based on the feedback you received 

Now that seeing that people did not like the idea of having all the characters being different personalities of the main characters instead of real people, we decided to make all of the characters that get killed be different people that were friends, since that makes a lot more sense. We were told that it would not make sense that the dreams would be in black and white so we ended up scrapping the idea of having the dreams in black and white and have a blurring effect at the beginning, so we can make it obvious that it is going into a dream.